Brazil a father and a son

Today, we had read a story about one of Brazil lottery winner nearly murdered by his father. The father was planning to kill his son because of $16 million jackpots. This story made me think about which are essential to our life? Money or blood relationships? Which one needs to be blamed?

 In my opinion, the father needs to be criticized than his son because of his illegal decision and immoral actions. Firstly, from a legal point of view, whether the son kills or not, his father’s behavior which he hired two killers to kill his son have committed a crime. As everyone has the right to live, nobody’s  life can be deprived arbitrarily by someone else. Even they are a blood relationship. Secondly, the father disregards moral values. In this case, the father put money above everything, even the life of his son. This is selfish behavior. If the father can discuss with his son or they can reach a compromise way, the ending of this story will be changed.

All in all, but although money is significant, there are still things that can not be bought with money.

Comments

  1. Kyeongmi lee(kelly)June 4, 2019 at 3:43 AM

    I respect your opinion. I thought the father and son were blamed both at first, but after read your post, I came to know the father has a bigger mistake. ^^

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  2. YU CHEN（Fiona）June 4, 2019 at 5:09 AM

    Your essay is awesome. you have clear topic sentence,and used a lot of academic vocabularies.
    but if you can separate your supporting ideas into two paragraphs it would be better.

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