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In my opinion,the tragedy of the woman be shot and killed on the bridge is caused by her selfish lover. Her husband, the soldier, the boatman, and herself both are guilty but they are not guilty as the selfish lover. I have two reasons to prove this lover is guilty.
Firstly is he stole other people's wife, no matter how much he loves this woman it is wrong. And living with this woman for 3 months he must have known this woman has family, but he stilled lives with this woman this means he didn’t mind to destroy other people’s family. In addition, is he is a selfish person because he even didn’t borrow 100dollars to this woman. I think this lover didn’t love this woman because if he loved this woman he wouldn’t let the woman went back, he would save her.
So, in my opinion, the lover the initiator of this tragedy.

Comments

  1. Hi Jerry, you always have the specific ideas about many controversial issues and your opinions can broaden my mind. However, you made some grammar mistakes in this assignment, for example, "is he is a selfish person because he....." and "he must have known..." the have should be change to "has". Moreover, you can use more academic vocabulary instead of the still ,but, and ,etc.

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