Dear Albert

My full name is Nam Van Hoang, I am a Vietnamese student who comes to New Zealand to learn English at the Auckland Institute of Studies. I was born in 1999 in Hai Duong city where is considered a peaceful, clean and airy city. There are many things that I will tell you about my life.

The first thing, I would share information about the academic level from childhood to adulthood. The primary school is the education environment that I was studying. After finishing primary school, I entered middle school and the end of student time in high school. However, I do not do to university in Vietnam that I intend to study abroad in New Zealand and register for study at AIS for the English NZCEL 4 course.

Secondly, there are four members in my family that is my parents, my older sister and me. My parents have a business in my hometown and I can learn business skills and experiences from them which could help me in college later. Furthermore, my sister is 27 years old and she also has a fashion store after finish her major in university in Vietnam.

Another, I also have some interesting hobbies that I think people will like. Therefore, I signed up for a cooking course while waiting for a New Zealand visa. Furthermore, Travelling is one of my hobbies which brings me many real-life experiences and I could take many photos of culture, people and amazing cuisines around the country. However, I still have not had the opportunity to go around Vietnam. I think that after finishing the study in New Zealand, I would spend time on this.

Finally, I also have the opportunity to travel abroad for travel where called the land of golden pagoda. And I have a chance to visit the Grand Palace was the place for Thai royal members. In addition, I am studying in New Zealand now, I think New Zealand will the best place for people and culture.

In concluding, there are four things of my life and experiences, which I would never forget them and that is my beautiful memories.

Best regards,

Nam Van Hoang

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  1. KittiJune 2, 2019 at 5:22 AM

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    1. KittiJune 2, 2019 at 5:24 AM

      I think your first mistake is “comes”
      comes use for he/she/it
      You can not use comes with I and You.
      And the second “ I would share” should be “I would like to share”

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