About Brazil father and son, my opinion
About Brazil
father and son, my opinion.
Firstly, he feels injustice, he thinks he
did not get the part that deserves it.
Secondly, he is selfish and he has no
responsibility as a father, stand on the ethical point of view, people can not
die for money and the man who died is still his son.
Finally, the main issues of this story,
this father wants to have this money alone, therefore, he has debated with his
son, finally entered the prison and both lost money.
Your topic sentence is clear and you have supporting ideas, that's nice. But I think you can add more details to each paragraph to improve them.
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