father n son (merlin)


Do we have to share financial gains?
The paragraph about ‘father and son’ showing a controversial issue, which is about should we share ours financial gains to others?Personally, I tend to share my gains to my family with servals ideas.

Firstly, Sharing personal gains will facilitate the relationship between people and will make relationship better.As we know, the relationship of people who would like to share with others is better than penny pincher’ relationship.

Secondly,ours parents cultivate us from kid to adult,we should do something for them.Financial gains may a way to make them life better or even change to another life-style.

Lastly,Donation is also a fantastic approach to gains money to the people who need to help.For those people who you gains some helped, they probably will gain helps back in the future.

Thus, financial gains play a significant role in the relationship between people. 


Comments

  1. BrittanyzhaoJune 4, 2019 at 1:48 AM

    There are clear topic sentence and well support ideas. I can find enough information about your topic from this essay.

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  2. SunnyJune 4, 2019 at 2:11 AM

    Hi Merlin,
    Your opinion is clear to understand, but I think that it may be better to change first person to third person such as "I" to "they"

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  3. KazuJune 4, 2019 at 4:31 AM

    Hi, this is Kazu.
    Your ideas are nice but I wanted to see some examples.

    ReplyDelete

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