Is money important or family? maybe some people will say money important, maybe some people will say family important. But for me, I think family important more than money, because family is priceless.
Today we reading the article,  a Brazilian father, his son got Lottery but did not give him money, so he wanted to kill his son. Triggered us to think,  a person can do anything for money? Let's change direction,If his son gave the money to his father, would his father still kill him?
I think money is very important, but it is not the most important, because there are always people in the world who can't give up and can't buy it with money. what's that? maybe is true love, maybe is family,

Don't give up the longer-term things for the sake of your immediate interests.

Comments

  1. Your ideas are clearly, if you can use the academic vocabulary instead of the simple word ,such as but, that would be better.

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  2. TOPIC SENTENCE IS NOT CLEARLY ENOUGH, TOO MANY ORAL WORDS,SUCH AS MAYBE ...
    BUT I THINK YOU CAN DO BETTER NEXT TIME .

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