NZCEL Level 4 AIS

Dear Albert, My name is Mengqi Su whom an international student from south of China. I am the eldest child in my family with other two siblings. My sister is going to achieve the degree of Master in England, and my little brother is going to enjoy his university life few months later. I prefer to be called Sugar as an easier way for three mainly reasons. Firstly, the surname “mengqi” is the pronounce of my surname is like Monchi which is hard to pronounce for people who does not speaking Mandarin; Thus, I decide to have a name that easy to say it out and remember. Moreover, my nick name is sounds as “sweet”, and most of my friends call me “su/ger” which means Brother Su in English. The main reasons I make up my mind to come to New Zealand 4 years ago because I love the atmosphere here. I am keen on travel, in addition New Zealand famous as it is an attractive place to be chosen. The planning that I have made is join into the trips during the leisure time, regardless I could say...

Dear Albert My full name is  Nam Van Hoang ,  I  am a Vietnamese student who comes to New Zealand to learn English at the Auckland Institute of Studies. I was born in  1999  in  Hai Duong city where is considered a peaceful, clean and airy city . There are many things  that I will tell you about my life. The first thing, I would share information about the academic level from childhood to adulthood. The primary school is the education environment that I was studying. After finishing primary school, I entered middle school and the end of student time in high school. However, I do not do to university in Vietnam that I intend to study abroad in New Zealand and register for study at AIS for the English NZCEL 4 course. Secondly, there are four members in my family that is my parents, my older sister and  me .  My parents have a business in my hometown and I can learn business skills and experiences from them which could help me in co...

According to the story “the bridge”, the woman gave the causes of being fatally shot by the solder on the bridge for two reasons as unethical and hiding her immoral behaviour. First of all, she found a lover when her husband went away for three months. As we know mostly countries or regions are illegal to have multiple relationship because it's violate a moral standard as common sense. The second source of her death is she was trying to hide the fact that she cheating on her husband, even she knows it will break the rude and being shot. Therefore, her death is a predictable result.

1)          There are three ways to show that you have exhibited consideration in your communication. 2)          Clarity in communication is reflected in three recommendations as: … 3)          The function of concreteness in communication is effect in three parts. 4)          A kindness conversation is going with natural courtesy that combined to few features. 5)          Correctness in communication implies that no grammatical errors should be occur, it has following the characters bellow. The first one is …

After reading this whole story, I think the husband should take responsibility for his wife fatally shot by a soldier on the bridge because of three reasons. The first reason for his liability is he cannot achieve the balance between his work and life. He gives priority to his career rather than his wife and family. The woman feels loneliness when her husband not around. Another reason is her husband also unfaithful to their marriage. He decided to break his vows because he was attracted to someone else. He loves the female more than his wife. The final reason is he has no passion for their marriage. He chose to escape under high pressure and blamed comes from.his wife.

Academic lectures are easier distinguished from daily conversation because of three reasons in accordance with interaction between speakers and listeners . First of all , they are unidirectional from speakers to listeners when it compared with everyday situation, there are no interactions. In additional, speaker masters lectures initiative which are differ from everyday conversations, a listener can raises a question if they don’t understand. Last but no least, lecturers makes continuous speech during lecture situations, in contrast , people are plays alternative role in the daily conversation.

There are three aspects between lecture listening and everyday conversation. The major differences between lecture and everyday conversation are language, interaction, and expectation. In these three aspects, it can be seen that listening skills are much more difficult than everyday conversation skills. The first of all, language is difference. The language used in the lecture uses most formal and professional terms like jargon. On the other hand, the language used in everyday conversation is simple and comfortable to use for everyone. The second difference is interaction. The lecture focuses on giving knowledge, so listener has no control even though a speaker talks continuously for a long time. In contrast, everyday conversations can interact with each other. Finally, expectation is different between a lecturer situation and everyday listening situation. In everyday conversation, taking notes is not necessary when listening to lectures, but immediate response is neede...

Create 5 topics sentences about 7C 3. Clarity is needed for successful communication because of two requirements. 4. Conciseness is the one of 7 suggestions for effective communication that can make receivers get the pin point and understand faster by which following .... 5. Concreteness is the way to scope or focus resources or range of data in conversation and here is techniques below..... 6. One of the elements of 7C, Courtesy is showing respect action and sincerity to all contracts by using expression words. Going into the deep for first one ..... 7. Consideration is a part of communication effectively, you must put your feet's into other shoes not only just yourself. The following will show how and why by two steps below.

No.3: The tips of effective communication involves an element clarity and there are three suggestions for it. No.4: The conciseness is one of the most important things for effective communication and there are three proposals for achieving conciseness. No.5: The courtesy gives us effective communication skills and there are three suggestions for it. No.6: Effective communication needs an element concreteness and there are three reasons to get concreteness. No.7: There are three suggestions for effective communication and the consideration is necessary for achieving good communication.

  The husband has a guilty for the woman’s death and There are three reasons why he is the most to blame for it.   Firstly, the husband left from the women for 3 months and he was selfish to decide a decision to go somewhere. It is difficult for her to know that the husband has no feelings to his wife and she may think it is same as unmarried. For example, when a married couple doesn’t have a good relationship and the husband lives separate from the wife, they may think it is unmarried. In fact, she betrayed to her husband because of his disappointment. Secondly, the husband suddenly came back to home and the woman was shaken up by it. She didn’t have a time to think why she flung her husband and her attitude of moral felt guilty about it. For instance, a woman who is loyal to herself and didn’t want to betray to her husband, she may be a panic at moment. In conclusion, the husband was not thinking any bad situation so that she was panicked when he was coming home. ...

 Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because a lecture use academic languages and subject specific words for teaching in the class or writing a thesis.   Firstly, the academic languages often use for university students or educated people because it is more formal than everyday conversation. For example, they may use the word “on the contrary” in academic situation. On the other hand, they may use the word “but” in everyday situation. In conclusion, people use academic words when it is more formal situation.   In addition, it is common to use jargon in the news paper and the university lecture because people can understand the word effectively. For instant, they may use jargon such as “GDP” or “FDI” in economics lecture and students can use these words any situation. On the contrary, They may use “money” in everyday conversation. In fact, people can understand easily when they use specific words at academic lectures.

Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because academic lectures are usually used in public places and there are two aspects that show their differences. In academic lectures, using more technical terms, there are many words that we can't understand, and academic lectures are the lecturers talking alone. All we have to do is listen and think. In daily communication, we are talking on both sides, and the words we use can be understood. This is the difference between the two aspects. On the other aspects, when the lecturer makes an academic speech, his speech is organized in language, so it is difficult to repeat, but in daily communication, if we do not understand, we can ask each other again. Therefore, academic lectures and daily conversations are very different, and they have different words, we must correctly distinguish and use

The bridge characters analysis The best way to compare compassion between The bridge characters is to start with Woman. The most epic character who cheated her husband and killed her self by trying to cross the bridge, she must be the first raking to blame.  Next the Solider who stand on his duty to protect the bridge and have to murder legally everyone who trying to cross the bridge he have many options to target where bullet go but he killed the woman in other hand he can shoot to stop or freeze the woman for avoid her life’s taken.  Next one is boatman who stand out for money, he would not to deliver the woman with out paid the business is the business and sometime the business can be elastic but he still being stiff.  Next one is the woman lover’s who is poor guy, lover is a lover when the real came back lover must be discouraged  but it’s not the point, the core is this guy    refused to give money to pay the boat man then let the wo...

Academic lectures are different from an everyday conversation because of the vocabulary. In the academic lectures, we usually use academic language and they are not common in our everyday conversation. Sometime we will find a lot of words we don't know.. For example, in the Business lectures, we usually will use as P2P and P2O or CPA, for normal people if they hear those words they will feel confused because they don't know the meaning or use them very very. In addition, the academic lecture is not daily life Conversation, if we have some question or some part of the lecture we don't understand, we can't just let the lecturer stop and ask the question.  Whatever, academic lectures are very difficult we need to put more attention on lecturers and jargon.

3. Clarity is one way to communicate effectively by using appropriate words and phrases to be correct and concrete. 4. Concisenesss is one way to communicate effectively by eliminating unnecessary words and using only relevant materals. 5. One of the elements of 7C, Courtesy, is to express respect and sincerity to other people for effective communication. 6. One of the elements of 7C, concreteness, is to use precise facts and figures to communicate effectively. 7. A consideration is one of the ways to communicate effectively by focusing you in you and your situation, not I and we.

Clarity Clarity。 ask people to use easy and clear words. Let readers understand what is your purpose and use punctuation makes the writing clear. Conciseness Because business executives are very busy, so we need to eliminate unnecessary words, only keep important information. Courtesy Show your respect and sincerity Concreteness Use specific facts and figures make sure they won ’ t misunderstand. Consideration To think from other views.

“The Bridge” is a story which tells a woman died because of shooting. So let’s explore who was the most blame for the woman’s death. The biggest factor is the left of her husband; if he did not leave for three months, the woman will not find a lover but will maintain her family. This woman also makes a big mistake; if she thinks before going to find her lover, there may not be a final tragedy. Unlike this couple, other people include lover, soldier, and boatman are not making a big mistake. The soldier just fulfills his duty, and the boatman just finds something for a living, the lover also did not have a responsibility to pay the money for this woman.

Academic lectures different from Everyday  conversation because.....          Academic lectures and everyday conversation are disparate for two reason. In fact, we use a  difference language level in everyday life depending on situation we face with, For example hang out  with friends, client contact, present workflow project.          First point is word, in academic terms we use specific words or special words for evangelist and  educational. For example, To talk about contrast in everyday conversation we might say "difference"  but academic lectures say "differ  to" "contradiction" and "diversity" so people are confused by unused  words.           Second point is communicate direction, the way that we use to communicate is always  interactive but not in academic terms. One-way communication is a main method that does not  including audience paticipation...

Clarity    Clarity communication is very important because it makes it easier to understand what you mean. Conciseness In communication, conciseness are very important, it can make communication more effective. Courtesy Courtesy is one of the indispensable factors in communication. Your respect can give the other person more serious listening. Concreteness Concreteness is also essential in communication because it provides more accurate and detailed information to the other party. Consideration Effective communication needs to be consideration. You need to consider what the communication content can bring to the other party and what effect it will have.

academic lecture Academic lectures are a different everyday conversation. Therefore, there are three main ideas to support which includes language, interaction, and expectations. The first reason is that the language academic in communication have many vocabularies like jargon words, idioms to description and presentation about a certain topic. However, everyday conversation the speaker uses simple words or familiar to say about daily life. Secondly, interaction in academic lectures and daily conversations have different. Because, academic lectures often say about a unidirectional or an aspect, no control and continuously which is hard to understand right away. Another way, a daily conversation that they simply turn talking and the can breaks. There are many differences between them. While academic lectures require people should be remembered and take notes on what important that they hear, sometimes it will be recorded and help people can easy to understand. By contras...

Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because of contrasting language, interaction, and expectation. One of the reasons to be different is academic lectures usually use formal and academic vocabulary, whereas everyday conversation uses informal and general words. This is because a  subject  of the  academic lecture is particular, so they need professional words. If they explain significant phenomenon related to their theme, they can indicate smoother and more apparent with jargon than simple words. However, general and informal language is more likely to make people understand their conversation easily. The function of communication creates a variant between academic lecture and everyday conversation. Another of the reasons, interaction is a significant factor in communication. Most academic lectures have unidirectional communication, which means one-way communication, so it cannot take a turn and continuously from speaker to the listener as we...

3: There are five reasons for clarity in effective communication,   correct and concrete, clear purpose, writing clear, choose familiar words, and construct effective sentences are necessary. 4: Conciseness is played a key role in communication is because eliminate wordy expressions and avoid unnecessary repletion is important in a busy situation. 5: People should courtesy in business communication is because when you're responding to business mail or answer some questions, you need to be sincere and tactful. 6: Concreteness is important in communication; the reason is if you need to deal with something you need definite and specific. 7: When you in a business situation, consider is important is because you need to show audience benefit.

In this article, the woman should deserve most to blame among them because of her immoral and unethical behaviors and breaking her vows. One reason for her culpability is her behaviors, which she did morally wrong dishonest actions. Even though she had a husband, she made a love affair and crossed the bridge for meeting the lover while her husband went away, which means that her behaviors were not right and did sin to her husband. Another reason for her accountability is to break her vows. When she got married, she made oaths for the future. In contrast to she never be faithful to her husband. She wanted to go quakily and hide her wrongs, so she tried to cross the bridge and died. As a result, her immoral and unethical behaviors led to her death as well as she did not keep her vows.

3. Clarity Excellent communication should require clarity, so it demands a clear purpose and proper punctuation. 4. Conciseness Good communication’s skill should be conciseness because of including only relevant material and avoiding unnecessary repetition. 5. Courtesy Courtesy in communication is a vital factor than others because it should be answered promptly and show respect with sincere, tactful, thoughtful, and appreciative words. 6. Concreteness Communication should be concreteness with purpose because of being specific and definite. 7. Consideration Consideration should need to communicate because of focus on you and can show benefits for the audience.

Academic lectures (Brittany) May 28, 2019 Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation and one of the reasons is interaction which includes two main aspects. First of all, the relationship. In academic lectures, there is a unidirectional relationship between speaker and listener. That means listeners do not need to any react in the lectures, their job only listening and making notes if they want to remember all of the details. However, in everyday conversation, the participants take a turn and the relationship is bidirectional which means the listener in everyday conversation can respond to the speaker. In addition, the other aspect is controlled. Listeners have no control in the academic lectures, not only because of the politeness, but also the speaker always continues an extremely long time. Also, listeners cannot ask any questions when they do not understand. However, in everyday conversation is completely different. Speaker can repeat and answer the listeners...

Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because of three reasons, language, interaction, and expectation. Firstly, there is no doubt that the lecture is a formal situation, but everyday conversation is informal. Speaker uses jargon words in a lecture, and people use general words in daily conversation. Secondly, the lecture is unidirectional, and everyday conversation is bidirectional. That means the lecture has one direct and everyday conversation has two directs. Moreover, the lecture always have a long time, and the speaker can not control, but in daily conversation, it is broken, and participants can repeat many times. Finally, the listener needs to take notes when in a lecture but do not needs to do this in everyday conversation.

Topic sentence The reason for clarity is that help people can easily read and understand, so it should be constructed effective sentences and paragraph Consciences are one of important factor affect communication than makes learners could appreciate information detail more than. The fact that courtesy in communication is the main factor help success and people should use good sentences to show respect. The reason to make a paragraph in communication become concreteness, because it makes people feel understandable. The importance of attention and appreciate in communication, because it will make people respect.

In my opinion，the tragedy of the woman be shot and killed on the bridge is caused by her selfish lover. Her husband, the soldier, the boatman, and herself both are guilty but they are not guilty as the selfish lover. I have two reasons to prove this lover is guilty. Firstly is he stole other people's wife, no matter how much he loves this woman it is wrong. And living with this woman for 3 months he must have known this woman has family, but he stilled lives with this woman this means he didn’t mind to destroy other people’s family. In addition, is he is a selfish person because he even didn’t borrow 100dollars to this woman. I think this lover didn’t love this woman because if he loved this woman he wouldn’t let the woman went back, he would save her. So, in my opinion, the lover the initiator of this tragedy.

Academic lectures and everyday conversation Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because under the idea of language, there are two main aspects   to support about how different between them. Comparing with everyday talking, we use more academic or formal word in lecture.But in normal conversation, we prefer to understand speaker ’ s meaning effectively.Take a muti-culture school as an example, some time students will hard to understand what are others students talking about if some students using too many academic words which has been used in thesis normally.Thus,using simply or complex words is a significant thing in comparing the different academic lectures and everyday conversation. Moreover,it is obvious that people use general english words in daily communication rather than using jargon or some specific words.This is due to the fact that jargon means special words in special areas,which cannot be understand by everyone,therefore, ja...

topic sentences （ 7C s ） May 28, 2019 3.Clarity is one of the elements in  effective communication  which includes five different aspects and could make the communication easy to understand. 4. Effective communication requires conciseness and there are three suggestions which talk about how to achieve this. 5.Courtesy is a crucial element in effective communication and there are four guidelines to help people make appropriate courtesy when they communicate with others. 6.Concreteness is important in effective communication because it could give audiences more accurate and detailed information, so there are two suggestions to follow. 7. Consideration should be requires in the effective communication and it has two recommendations which include personal pronoun and benefit to audience.

Through the bridge story which is an immoral woman was shot dead by a soldier on the bridge, we can not conclude that it is a specific person's fault, but two lessons can be learned from the woman. The first lesson is that it makes the situation harder to hide the unethical act and puts someone at worse risk if he or she does not judge it properly. The second is that the infidelity behavior of a married woman in love with another man can not have positive effects or results.

    Academic lectures are different from everyday conversation because academic lectures usually used in formal occasions such as business meetings and education.Everyday conversation is more relaxing compared with lectures.The interaction difference shows in 2 aspects.   The first of all is ,academic lectures are unidirectional and no turn talking.The speakers are having monologue.In academic lectures. Audiences don’t need to respond ,just listen.On the other hand, daily conversation are bidirectional, people take turns talking.Both of them are advancing the dialogue.   The another aspect is , speakers speaking continuously in the academic lectures.They move on step by step and keep a tight grip on the process.In daily conversation, if you don’t understand or feel unclear, you can ask for repeat again.    In conclusion, they are the interaction differences between academic lectures and daily conversation.

3. There are five competencies to get the clarity which is the most important factor in effective communication. 4. One of the most important issue in effective communication is conciseness, that is easier for listeners to appreciate. 5. It is true that courtesy is the main factor in effective communication and there are four recommendations in this factor. 6. There are two ways to being concreteness which is most important influence in effective communication. 7. Consideration is the most important part in effective conversation with two suggestions.